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A thank you speech or appreciation speech prepared and given with sincerity means so much to those you acknowledge.
'No man is an island'
When we achieve, we usually do so because others have helped. Your speech of appreciation is the gift you give in return for what was given you.
Generally this type of speech is not spontaneous. You will have some forewarning and time to consider what you want to say and who you want to mention.
Although the occasions may vary hugely, for example:
Cover these three content areas and you'll be fine.
Thanks but no thanks! What I really want is a ...
Choose a theme.
Now that you've sorted out who you wish to mention and what for, you are ready to write your thank you speech.
Like any other form of speech you need 3 parts:- an opening, the body or middle where you put all your acknowledgments, and a conclusion.
the size of your people to thank/appreciate list and the amount of time you have, do
include a small story about the lead-up making this event possible. Stories
always go down well because they let people in to share your experience more
Check out this page on story telling in speeches.
Example: "To Alex, Mary, Judy and Sam, thank you for making me remember to laugh. You helped me keep my sanity and perspective when the going was tough."
Before you finalize the content, check out these 'thank you quotations'.
They offer different ways of expressing your gratitude. You could find just what you need to spark your creativity and provide the thread/theme to unite your speech. It can be so much more than a long string of thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you ...
And a reminder that may sound a bit stuffy or even 'old-school'
- your thank you speech really does need to focus on the positives as well as being
This not the place to air unresolved grievances, to make remarks or tell in-jokes that are only understood by a few.
Many people make the assumption that once they've got the words of their speech sorted, they're set to go. That's not true. Practice completes the speech process.
Giving yourself several rehearsals, firstly by yourself and then in front of friends or family, will help enormously. Click this rehearsal link for detailed information about how to rehearse effectively.
For the condensed and shortened version covering good rehearsal practice follow the points below.
Getting the timing right on your speech is an essential part of making it a success. Go on too long and people stop listening. Be too brief and there's a danger you've missed things out.
The only way to find out how long your speech is, is to time yourself as you say it out loud at a normal speaking rate.
If it's too long, look for areas you can cut. Maybe you need to group a few more people together or perhaps you need to shorten some of the specific examples about why it is you're thanking someone.
If it's too short, add more detail. Repeat until you get the length right.
Write the main points of your thank you speech on cue cards. Good notes will keep you on track while ensuring you cover everything you want to like, for instance, the name of every person you want to thank and why.
(If you don't know about using or how to make cue cards find out here. Cue cards are preferable to reading your speech.)
Practice your speech by yourself until you are familiar with the flow of it. Then practice in front of someone whose judgement you trust.
Ask for feedback on whether or not you've included everybody you should, how the speech links together, how your delivery could be improved.
Being well prepared is the best defense there is against feeling nervous! Your careful preparation will give you confidence.
One thanking your colleagues for a job well done?
Here's a cracker (a good one) to use as a template. It's utterly adaptable. Takes bits out, flick bits in ... until you have it just as you want it.